Maximum Ride ~based off the book~

Subject: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Oct 06, 2008 3:42 am

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MAXimum Ride

\" Warning
If you dare to read this story,
You become part of the Experiment.
I know that sounds a little mysterious -
but it\'s all I can say right now. \"
~angel experiment~ book 1 ~

*Im on book 2!*
I say the story has gotten really good! and romance
Makes mylittle heart go flitter flatter
And action! Boom! Bang!
So much !....the end was SHOCKING...

*Im on book 2*
All the drama makes a book
Siding with bad-guys
Wa oh! OMG
p.s. Im hyperventilating right now!

*I finshed them all a loooong time ago they are soo
good trust me this is the kind of book you need to read. Evry page you
are on the edge, either with max and fang romance (OMG!)
and/or the flock is trapped or maybe
exscaping. The wild life of the flock has no time for naps. so you wont either!

Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ - Page 8 Maximum_Ride_3

Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ - Page 8 Maximum_Ride_3

Now I got your attention, I suggest you listen up. As I said before, if you open this book your life is in grave danger.
Along with the world. My job is to save my Family -Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gasman, And Angel, along with the world.
Your job, Is to help. I will give you all the information you need. All the info. I have.
My story is in the making. I will up date you. At the moment Im running from the evil lab crazy scientist who want to take us apart one by one.
And we are running from half human half Wolf creatures with have a taste for us flying humans. Erasers. Their on the scientist side.

Im Max. A lab baby as far as I know. me and my family. We aren\'t related by blood. But We ARE family. Im their leader. we are 98% human the other 2% is bird. And let me tell you that tiny 2% has had a big impact...

Along with our wings we have sharp vision fast healing and many other secrets to our own bodies we are just discovering.
Those others are erasers for now they don\'t have their wings but its not long till the werewolf freaks do get \'em.
So I suggest you get a move on it and help us.

** Will you join the experiment and fight with us?**

~ You are not part of Max\'s flock but a new experiment. You also may be an eraser~
~ Are no rules just guide lines! will post new ones as story progresses ~

To join you must follow these will post them when join
Basicly Erasers are Half human half wolf.

They can change into a werewolf kinda thing at any given moment they choose.
They work for the lab guys (scientists) who want to expermient on the flock.

The erasers are the Evil lab schools body guard. they do anything and everything te school tells them to do.
They have lovely voices and look like models.
Basiclly their out to kill the flock or put them in cages.
they are another one of the lab guys experiments.
~thanks for reading~

~anything you don\'t get. Please ask. I will help out as much as possible with explianing. But the best place to find out would be the book!~

Form
Username:
Experiment type:
Name:
Gender:
Wings(if u have them):
Fur (if ur a dog):
Human looks:
Age (all young 5- 15 erasers can be any age above 16):
(everyone is still in the school)

Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ - Page 8 Fang-maximum-ride-937488_577_491

Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ - Page 8 Fang-maximum-ride-937488_577_491

*typing KEY*
Flock = any color but red dark red or black
Erasers = dark red red or black

Peace- flock -(me)
~male, black wings. black hair covering his eyes. looks lot like fang.
He is dark and silent much like fang in the book. Well built. wheres punk kinda stuff. 15 (the pic up above)~

James- flock -(me)
~male, white wings blond short messy hair blue eyes Tall palish. Well built.
Easy going quite at times. Wheres a lot of nice clothes but not in the lab cause they don\'t have any. yet 15~

Steel- Eraser -(me)
~male brown hair and fur, brown eyes Well built.
Wheres cargo pants tan. with any number of plain color shorts 19 ~

Sliver- flock -(me)
~female, brown long hair tannish wings.
Skinny nice shapes and curves. freckles light footed. fragile
looking but tough and ruff. usually picks fights. (kinda like max) 13~

Roxian- Eraser -(Mrs. Gerard Way)
~female, Black as night fur. all, dark brown eyes that show no emotion, has a curve,
waist length black hair with red highlights, light tan, no freckles, and long black nails with red tips, 18~

Diana- flock -(Mrs. Gerard Way)
~Girl,Wings Dark purple inside and light purple on the outside
Average height, bright brown eyes, mid back length dark brown hair with natural highlights, light tan, many freckles, and average
length dark purple nails with light purple tips 12~

Caitlyn Laynard- Flock -(Feisty_feline)
~Girl Dark purple/black wings. brunette with dark blood red streaks
in her hair hazel eyes, tall 15~

Seamus Molser- flock -(Feisty_feline)
~guy wings black with red streaks. Long dark brown hair, not as tall as CAitlyn, always
has a rope necklace on, with four symbols 15~

Frost- Eraser -(Feisty_feline)
~girl Fur pure white, with the occasionally spot of silver. Blonde hair with White streaks, they\'re
natural, piercing, cruel blue eyes, usually in light colored jeans and a white tee shirt of some sort. 17~

Ricky Cena- Flock -(John Cena)
~ Male Wings are RED and his pic is bellow and is 15
http://www.johncena4u.com/chain-gang/2007/09/john-cena71.jpg ~

Mirah grenfield- flock -(Mirah Sunsky)
~A Girl, her wings are a very pale blue at the top. The blue gets brighter and darker as it progresses down her wings and the bottom is a navy blue, almost black. Mirah has straight, silky black hair that ends just below her shoulders. Her eyes are a bright blue, almost matching on of the shades that make up the colors of her wings. She's slender, with long athletic legs and a tall stature. Her skin is somewhat pale. She is 15~

Kristen Holbrook- flock -(Mirah Sunsky)
~A Girl with bright purple, with black edged wings. she has stringy dirty blonde hair. Her eyes are two different colors, the left is ice blue and the right bright green. She's normal height and very slender. 15 ~

Raven Greene_ flock _(DragonMist)
~A Girl that has jet black wings with a pale grey fringing the bottom. Raven has neat, black hair that's usually tied back in a ponytail. She's tall and slender, with somehwat long legs and arms. Her eyes are bright blue. 13~

Shane Durhall_Flock_(ragonMist)
~A Guy With wings that are also black. Shane has shaggy brown hair that hangs in his face. He's large, though not huge. He has green eyes.
14~

Name: Love
Looks: (Kristen Stewart)
Personality: sweet, flirty, sassy, spicy, easy going, funny, playfgul, outgoing
Wings: black with minor red accents

New info From MAx~ Rainbow Smile

~scientist have been adjusting their experiments when new babies are born. Some have super natural abilities like angel. SHe can read minds.
(if you like to be super natural please pm me ur form and ur extra ability)
~I have just discovered that erasers have short life spands. they die in 6 years but grow fast
~ I don\'t know how long we last tho. Us flock freaks. I have been having huge head probs. I hear voices and see odd images that show up on T.V. screens as I pass by but also are in my head. (weird defect happens when you want to only SOME) We think it might be a micro chip in my brian.
*Note to self: Cut my hair. Not fun having it slapping in your face when flying*(cool little things happen threw out my reading)
~ Holly crow! the School has a new PET! A talking dog with wings! 'totaly' wicked!
(soon to be avilable as a carrie)
- My life just keeps getting Better, upgrade! erasers new winged wolves! Just what I needed (get yours soon!)

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:16 am

Caitlyn stared at him and then at the erasers below she jerked her ead at him, a motion for Jess to help her. She flew by him carefully and hooked her arm under his, Korbyn came up, and carried him by himself taking him from CAitlyn.

Caitlyn sighed, "Show off." she smirked.

(I've read all four books, they're AWESOME, I can't wait till the next one comes out!)

6 small specks, looked like hawks, but the others knew better, slowly came closer..... CAitlyn started flying toward them her wings outstretched one bloody but she continued Seamus hung in the back a shameful expressioin on his face.

Frost and Rex snarled.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:06 am

(I know! Peace is like fang! TEHEHEHE)

Peace didnt want help but didnt refuse he needed it but wanted to shrug them off.

Jess flew up after seamus got hold. She frowned at them.... James flew up to her side. "were to?"

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Fri Dec 19, 2008 6:01 am

"Whereever Fang wants us to go." Caitlyn smirked, a little spark in her eyes.

Seamus snorted. Korbyn dropped him, "Whoops lost my grip." he couinted to 5 and then darted down and pulled Seamus back up. "Sorry, you get a little heavy, you know, with the big head and all." Korbyn chuckled.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Fri Dec 19, 2008 6:11 am

Fang looked up confused from his clumsy flying. "Im fine." he pulled himself up his jaw clenching body stiff as a pian ripped threw his body to do so.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Fri Dec 19, 2008 9:32 am

(you mneant Peace, I think.)

The six figures came closer, Max laughed a little and Iggy asked, "What?" Gazzy dive bombed down ad unfurled his wings quickly while Max watched him carefully. Fang.... was Fang.

Caitlyn stopped, the flock hovered. "Max, Fang?" she called.

Max swooped down, "Wassup? Long time no fly." she said.

Seamus eyed Fang disgustedly, and Caitlyn elbowed him hard and Korbyn taunted him almost dropping him.

(so who do you want, Fang or Max? Iggy or Nudge? Gazzy or Angel? )

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:02 am

Jessica smiled "Hey!"
peace nodded James waved

(ill take all the boys if thats okay)

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Sat Dec 20, 2008 2:18 am

(Not that's totally fine I'll take the girls then. Smile

))

Max looked them over and then at Peace, "Dude he doesn'tlook so good, we found a small vacation house to the west a couple miles away, you think he'll make it?" she asked.

Caitlyn shrugged, "Not sure, but it's worth a try." she said.

Korbyn dropped Seamus but Seamus was okay already, his wing was alittle bent but he could suck it up. Korbyn hovered by Peace ready to catcyh him.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:36 am

Peace looked up discussed

Fang looked at peace he smiled to himself. He was just like Fang. He looked at Max...

Gazzy smiled "Yipe! New friends to fly with!"

Iggy concentrated on their voices. and gazzy and Iggy slapped hands

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:28 am

"Deal with it, PEace." Caitlyn said, "You're hurt, and we're not going to carry you all day, then again, maybe Jess would volunteer." Caitlyn teased.

Max's eyes met Fangs. We'll fly with them, they seem nice. they passed between that look.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Sat Dec 20, 2008 11:37 am

Fang nodded. "ill help peace." Mr. Tough... Mr. mushy-helper? guess so

Peace glared at caitlyn and the suprised at fang

Gazzy wooped
Iggy smiled

James smiled
Jess frowned at caitlyn and rolled her eyes then she looked at iggy so weird how he and gazzy could high 5 without missing. she also smiled he was cute! well so were most of the bird boys. even some of the erasers weren't so bad when they weren't all GRR
she woundered if she would ever have a shoulder to lean on like fang and Max...

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 2:34 am

Korbyn had agoofy smie on his face.

Caitlyn rolled her eyes, such a ham.

Angel hovered Celeste in her arms, she hugge dhim tight. She got funny thoughts from all of them. She giggled once.

Max looked at Peace. And then down on the ground, "We got visitors." Frost and Rex in the lead, at least 40 erasers ran through the tres towardthem and climbing the trees, and helplessly jumping at the Flock's heels.

Caitlyn fleew up next to Max, they led as the others followed, carrying bears, carrying people and trying to stay above the erasers biting jaws. Caitlyn banked hard, she swirled down and knocke two erasers off the trees, they had gotten too close to her flock for her comfort. She flew back up, "Higher guys." she yelled. Mx and she flew up as high as they could go and still able to breath. Total was panting.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 3:27 am

(Oh toatals a boy mwhahahA)
Toatal squrimed in complante

Fang bashed a few erasers to staying in the back with james hovering over peace

Jess flew up to flank the outside makeing the youngers in the middle and the injured.

Steel growled at them he unfolled his patched on wings and jumped from the tree and ruffly begain to fly.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:09 am

Nudge looked at Iggy and Gaz, "Guys, do it." (bomb) She nodded encouraginly to her 'brothers'

Max looked at them, "Ah, shoot." she muttered. "Everyone down, quickly."

They dive bombed down (All my charries at least) their wings close to their bodies. Max covered her ears. She waited for the boom, and shower of eraser pieces.

(whjat book are you on?)

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:18 am

(im done with em all)
everyone else(my carries) followed
Iggy tossed total to fang who yipped as he flew across open sky. Fanf shelltered him.

Gazzy and igy flew dow into a swarm of erasers and dropped the boom. they shot up 5 4 3 2 .... BOOM! iggy and gazzy flliped thrw the air as the blow pushed them off coarse and they knocked into the others but they were unharmed

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:46 am

(Ylu read Maximum Ride: Protectors: 1: The final warning? just wondering)

Max unfurled her wings. And floated toward a cliff, high, high up, also with a HUGE cave in it.

Nudge screamed as a piece of Eraser hit her, "EW! Gross Gaz!: she screame dand knocked it off of her and she landed in the cave quickly tumlbing foward,"Oof, I'm OK- ay!" she yelled from the back.

Angel flew in withCeleste still in arms.

Caitlyn, Korbyn and Seamus all got in, Caitlyn shook the Eraser blood from her wings, like water, "Ew." she muttered. Seamus sat down in a corner pouting. She rolled her eyes.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 4:52 am

Jess sat down next to seamus. James next to her.

Peace limped over near fang and fang welcomed him leving him room to sit next to him.
Iggy sat with gazzy and total mumbled complantes

(From the angel experiment to the final warning)

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:04 am

(okay just wondering I didn't want to spoil anything. Smile

)

Max sat next to Fang, their arms touchign lightly. Nudge stumbled over to her and Angle also sat by her.

Caitlyn watched them closely, her head leaned on her buddy's shoulder.

Korbyn looked down at her, "You okay?" he asked.

"Yeah fine *yanw* Just REALLLLLLLLLLY tiwred." she yawned ehr words soudnding funny.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:10 am

Fang looked at caitlymn then sideglanced at max. Their arms touched. he shifted his arm ever so lightly and his boody to move closer. She wouldnt notice it tho

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:37 am

She nestled her head into his shirt and shoulder and she was quickly breathign quietly, asleep.

He sighed quietly andleaned his head on hers, he was also quickly asleep.

MAx looked at FAng also as he looked at her, she turned away, for some weird reason she blushed very minorly but stiikll! Max!? Blush!? Since when? she snapped at herself/.

Nudge and Angel fell asleep laying down.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:54 am

Peace layed back against the cold stone cringing as the sharp edges dug into his wounds. but he closed his eyes in hope of sleep.
James fell asleep right away and his head cocked to one side and his body slwoly fell to the ground almost landing in caitlyns lap.

Jess watched Seamus. "you okay?' she whispered

Fang kept his eyes on her, wishing she for once would let her guard down and just lean onto his shoulder at the very least.

Toatal snggled up next to angle
iggy and gazy layed curled up next to each other

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:16 am

Max's head lolled to the side, and fell onto Fang's shoulder, incoherently she nestled her head deeper into his shirt, and shoulder. Her arms wrapped around his one and pulled her self closer to him, again incoherently, this is what happened when she slept.

Caitlyn and Korbyn were breathign softly, still outcold.

Seamus shook his head, "No not really." he said.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:24 am

Fang smiled and brushed the top of Max's head with his other hand.
(what happened to love?)

Jess patted his knee. "thats okay Im fine." she smiled trying to help in some way.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:27 am

He smiled weakly, "That's good." he said and his hand met hers, he twined his fingers with hers.

Max nestled into him more.

(oh yeah!)

Love was sloudched completly alone against the wall next to James.=, her eyes had fluttered shut in sleep a while ago.

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:51 am

James begain to snore loudly
Peace smiled and then fell asleep.
Jess smiled and leaned her head on his shoulder. "im not mad." she promised

Subject: Re: Maximum Ride ~based off the book~ Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:59 am

"Weoll that's one person who doesn't hate me." he said smiling, "But that's all I need." he whispered, and their lips met.
Caitlyn pushed JAmes' head off her lap and onto her coat. Se nesteled herself deeper into Korbyn

Max sorta crawled onto Fang lap curling into him, incoherently.

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