Stranded on a island

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Imagine you are in the ocean with all your friends on a one week cruise. your parents let you go because it seemed safe. But now a current swept away you and your boat. You and all of your people fell out of the boat and now you have to swim to a nearby deserted island that is near you. now imagine that you are stranded on a island. you have no way to get out and you barely have enough food to surrvive on your own. You have to work for food, And you also have to get along with the people you are stranded with. Sorta like "Survival of the fittest." And cellphones or Any devices or Such that can call do not work on this island. Can you surrvive?

Rules: 10 Characters at the most
No powerplay of other charries
havefun!

FORMS:
Name:
Age:
Looks:
Eqipment you have with you:
Personality:

MY FORMS:
Name: Ayla jonas
Age: 15
Looks:
Eqipment you have with you: A back pack with A few snacks, Money, Scissors, A mirror, makeup, Paper and 4 Changes of clothes.
Personality: Sweet and outgoing, Smart and caring

Name: Amber snow
Age: 14
Looks:
Equipment you have with you: 3 Water bottels, 1 Snack, Mirrow, Pocket knife, Extra pair of shoes, 3 changes of clothes, And Sunglasses

Jackie's eyes slowly started to slip closed. Everything was starting to
get dark. She had put up a fight, but she was going to lose. No matter
how much she had put into survival, she was going to lose.
"Land," A soft, broken voice whispered weakly in her ear. Jackie's eyes
fluttered for a moment and she saw the soft pie piece of land just a
few hundred yards ahead. She had to get the child to safety. She
mustered up every last teeny bit of strength she had, and pushed
herself forward, sweeping her arms through the icy water. Her arms
stung and prickled as the cold tongues of water licked at her bare
skin. The salt burned it's way into her eyes, ears, mouth and nose, and
she couldn't breather without gasping in pain. But her eyes were on the
prize. The little child on her back had to live, it was ineviatable.
Once they got to land, Jackie was free to die. But the little girl had
to get to safety.
Suddenly, a huge waved swelled up behind them. They flew to the top in
a swift, sudden movement. The shocked child's tight grip on Jackie's
back suddenly faltered, and the pressure on her shoulders was gone. The
child had slipped.
"NO!" Jackie screamed, a pathtic burst of enegry surging through her
body. "NO, no, no! Please nO!" She scanned the ragin waters
desperately, screaming for the child. A lone hand waved slowly, just
above the water. And then it submerged.
"I've got you!" jackie screamed, swimming rapidly against the current
to where the child's hand had been. "I have you!" She cried, tears
freezing as they tried to leave her eyes. "Please, honey, KICK!" She
begged to the child, who she knew couldn't hear her. She groped around
blindly in the dark waves, desperately trying to find the little girl.
Water screamed and crashed it's way down on her head, forcing her under
many times. But she did not falter. She splashed through the water,
screaming in desperate agony. "NO!" She cried. She felt something cold
and soft. A hand. She latched her own hand arond and pulled with all
her might. The child's head popped into view, followed by the rest of
her body. "No, honey, please, we almost made it!" She begged as she
grabbed the child and swam as fast as she could towards the shore.
"Please, please, be okay!" She pleaded. They were almost there. A wave
suddenly crashed on them, and pushed them towards the shore.

The rouch scratch of sand met Jackie's face as the wave slammed the
against the beach. She looked at the little child, who's eyes had now
opened. "You made it, honey," She whispered, before slipping into
unconsiousness.

Ayla ran Up to Jackie to help.

"Oh my!!"

She said trying to wake jackie up.
"Are you okay There??"

Jackie heard the voices, but she couldn't move. She wanted them to know
it was okay to let her die, just to take care of the girl.

Donney ran adhead of Hailey, everyhting followed,. Haily was on Cheastnut's back, since she was a toughtbreed. they gallops, with the small dogs in her arms. Simon, Nemo and Shadow ran behide them. Mightnight had half the luggage ibn ehr back, and teh otehr half on ehr motehrs back.

James and jessica walked on the beach. Jessica had her jeans rolld up and her blue tank was just washed and dryed. her matted hair blew in the ocean breeze

James was whereing some tan cargo shorts. and a green T with a dress white shirt with green cross pattrens un bottoned and blowing in the wind

Ayla stared to Shake Jackie.

"Oh no!! I think she is a gonner!!"
She yelled when she saw Jame and jessica.

Jessica and james looked over at them confused. "what?" Called Jess

"This girl Is dying!! Do you have a first aid kit or anything?"

James and jess ran over.
"No. What happened?" Jessica sprinted over and called.
"Whats hurt" Siad james leaning over her

Jackie heard the voices. They seemed so far away. The darkness clung to her body, and the exhausation was smuggling her. She wanted to tell the voices it was okay to let her die, but just to protect the little girl. She moaned wearily in response, her head lagging to the side. Suddenly, as she tried to breathe, her airway was compltely blocked off. Water. Gallons of water were filling her lungs, since she had swallowed it in the ocean. She had to cough, to let them know she was choking. But she didn't have the strength. Her hand slowly raised to touch her throat, hoping it would signal to them she needed help. Now.
The little girl watched in confusion the whole scene. She ran to Jackie's side and lay her hand against her head. "The's (She's) cold," She whispered worriedly. Her whole body ached and stung and was so tired she could just fall. But she didn't.

Ayla pointed to Jackie.
"Her!"

(pm me please, ayla!)

Jackie choked silently, her head starting to get hot. Everything started to go a strange shade of blue.
The little girl collapsed suddenly, her head narrowly missing a sharp rock. Collapsed from pain, sorrow, but most dominantly, exhaustion.

James pushed down on the girls chest trying to push the water from her lungs and then angled her head to do mouth to mouth. Jessica watched in horror

Jackie coughed up water, her shirt soaked by the sudden explosion. She coughed and gagged, too limp to move her arms to help herself sit up. She then felt James's cold, soft lips against hers, and a rush of air racing down her throat. Suddenly, the blue tinge on her surroundings was gone, and it was back to normal. But then, she blacked out. Just before she went under, she could feel another breath of air being forced down her throat, and was forever grateful to the person. (wait, was her doing the girl or jackie? lol, i can just change the name if it was the girl xD)

(it was james.)
James tilted his head to her mouth to check for breathing. it was raspy but she seemed okay. her chest rose sloely and fell.

"She seem fine noe." said jess
"was that salt water? If so we need to wash out her mouth and gett her out of the sun too."
She said kneeling down to feel the girls fowheard.

jAmes rested. his hands on his knees that were in the sad. supporting him

Jackie felt rough air shoving it's way through her throat. It hurt. She wanted it to stop. It burned it's way through for a while, and she slowly gained the strength to breathe on her own. It stung a little, but was a relief comapred to the other forcefulness before. her eyes fluttered, a quick glance of her surroundings coming into view. She saw a teen girl with her little girl, and she instantly felt a wave of relief. Leaning over her, she saw a cute boy looking through concerned eyes into her own. She gasped, the sudden force of breath cutting sharply in her throat, and let her eyes fall close. He had been the one doing CPR? Why did he stop? She tried holding her breath so he would do it again, but her head started to pound. She sucked in some air, breathing regularly again, and let herslef fantasize over the fleeting image of him she had stored in her head.

Name: Zac Efron
Age: 21
Looks:
Eqipment you have with you: backpack with food,water,video camra,dvd player,TV,HSM 1,2 and 3 movies,money,
Personality: nice,caring,hott,sweet and deadly in love with vanessa


Name: Vanessa Ann Hudgens
Age:19
Looks:
Eqipment you have with you: same as zac
Personality: same as zac exept in love with zac


them together!

Ur pics do not work

james smiled with releafe. "good your okay."
Jess leaned down her hair fell over her face a bit as she pulled james lightly on the shoulder. "come she needs water." Jessica said in a sweet soft voice.
James nodded and took jess's hand as she pulled him up.
He had a cold sweat on his forhead from the drama. The little beads were wiped away as he ran his sleeve and back of his hand over his fore head.
jess turned to the girl and the young child. "Watch her."
And the two teens dashed off. Spraying golden sand.

James and jess found the water bottles they had refilled and boiled. they were chilly from sitting over night. James scooped it up and Jess grabbed some fruit in case she wated something sothing. She picked out a bag of raseberrys. soft and juicy. should sooth it.

They came back jess knelt down. James handed her the water. and Jess gave it to the girl. James stood a bit back. and waited....

:(

zac and vanessa say hi then go surfin together

(anyone here?)

(i am)

Vanessa Runs Over to see if everones ok! "OMG! Is everyone ok ova here? Said Vanessa.

(ah Star2be!)

(umm..........?)

"R u guys like, OK?!?!? Said Vanessa

Jmes nodded. "were good now."