The Outcasts

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First topic message reminder :

Someone made you leave.

But now, we want you to stay.

Outcasts are lovely, delicate things. For some reason, they weren't right. Here, no one is right, nor wrong. We're all the same.

THE STORY:

Once, one stupid, naive, young maiden angered her mother. The brat was cursed by a witch her mother had hired, and was changed into a wolf. The poor girl couldn't find anywhere to live, and made her pack. She found a wonderful male wolf.

When the male was just a pup, one of his littermates had bitten his leg, and rendered that leg useless. The three-and-a-half legged male was shy, but kind and leaderly.

These wolves were trained in magic, such as controlling the elements, conjuring simple things, or healing.

Now, the pack is far from outcasts. They have a complicated hierarchy and are one of the more powerful packs. They even cultivate their own herbs!

Will you join their pack?

(read everything from here on, it's important!)
The PACK:
(in order of the hierarchy)
HEADS:
Lemon-the maiden's granddaughter-Sunny F
ALPHA MALE- OPEN

HONORED ONES:
Most Honored-

ADULTS:
Beta Male-
Beta Female-
Flint- a big wolf who is very, very truthful- Lily M
Lava- a brave and strong adult who can freeze things- Mnm F
Mint- a scared young adult who is a plant user- Sunny F

Nannies-

RASCALS:
Gang Leader-(the rascals are always fighting)
Asim- a older teen who is very knowledgable about plants - Mnm M
Brooke- a kind, calm, and caring wolf who uses her mind to move - Mnm F
Mia- a clever and strong wolf who blends in with her surroundings -Lily F
Rosco- abnoxious and disliked, that cannot be denied- Sunny M

PUPS:
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ROGUES:
Arachne- a red and black wolf with a secret weapon- Sunny F
End- a dark and intimidating wolf with a shared past- Tiger M
Punk- ?- Meer F
Skull- an intimidating wolf with a dusty white pelt - Tiger M

HERB CLAN MEMBERS:
Herb Mistress:
Mint
Asim
HUNTERS:

On the hierarchy(please read all of this, including the next two sections):

The Heads, Lemon and ? are Alphas. Eventually, Honored Ones may be promoted to advisors.
The Most Honored is the oldest and wisest of the Honored Ones and will be promoted. Honored Ones are (a) adults too old to do much, or (b) very wise adults.
Adults are pretty much Warriors, though one pair serves as betas. Nannies are not MOTHERS of pups, as that is strictly prohibited in wolf packs. They watch pups. Lemon MAY allow some pups to be born.
Rascals, being teens, fight and generally form gangs. The gangs fight eachother, as well as other packs. They're pretty much only intimidating. Gang leaders are the leaders of these games. They are promoted based on the Roleplayer's Decision.
Pups are self-explanitory.
On becoming the Alpha Male or Betas:
The Alpha Male will be chosen by me. I am not saying which traits are most desirable in the wolf, but looking a Lemon's bio might help. Being a GREAT roleplayer will definitely increase your chances.
Betas are a MATED PAIR. But, I will not allow the male and female to be played by the same person! That's right, you've got to work with someone else and be a good PAIR to be one of the Betas. I will watch pairs who interact well and pick one. Note: You may have a pair in which you play both male and female, but they have no chance for being chosen.
On other promotions:
Most Honored One should be a knowledgable Roleplayer, and a great character. Lemon and her mate will decide on who, and the Most Honored One will rotate.
Advisors are hand picked from Honored Ones. They should be like Most Honored Ones.
Honored Ones are promoted from adults by Lemon and the Alpha Male.
Nannies are chosen by Lemon and the female beta. They should be responsible and motherly.
Gang Leaders are elected by the Roleplayers who play Rascals.
Ages are determined by the Roleplayer, and must check with me before amazingly becoming an adult.
Though not noted on the roster because there is no age, indivuals who are knowledgable with plants are on the Herb Clan(see Mint). THey are in charge of the garden.The Herb Master/Mistress is elected by the Herb Clan. You may ask to be a Herb Clan in your form, but warning, not all requests will be fufilled, especially for pups. Herb Clan members should have powers with plants.
As well as Herb Clan, the Hunters are another group. They are mainly male, and generally older than Pups. A few exceptions will be made, but most Hunters are either Rascals or Adults. It is generally taboo for a Hunter to be in the Herb Clan, a visa versa. Hunters should be strong and brave, and know their way around the territory. Great Roleplayers, too. No "I returned with a rabbit". That's kitty stuff. These wolves work together to kill moose. They don't return with 'em, either. They go into detail. GRACIAS!

RULES:
General Roleplay Rules;
-No uberness, Mary Sues, Gary Stus, etc
-No killing without permission from character's owner
-Nothing crazy; they are wolves, and are human to a certain point, but use your common sense!
Sunny Rules;
-Use proper grammar
-Inactive wolves will be marked, then, with approval from the RPer, deleted
-No limit on the number of wolves, but mass forms really bugs me.
-Use full sentences in forms
-Be in depth in history, if you say mystery, that means you have no history.
- Example powers are:
-shapeshifting into a CERTAIN persona, instead of everything
-controlling one aspect of nature, like one type of herb as opposed to all plants
-conjuring a certain item

More on powers-
To start, use an example stated above. If the character is older, the power should be more useful. i.e. A Pup could change into a stork, but an Adult or Honored One could turn into many types of birds. These powers are made better if the character is promoted to Alpha or Beta.
-Gore is unnecessary, but if used properly, is gore-eat!

THE FORM:
Name: (Please write it in the color you RP in.)
Gender:
Posistion: (Honored Ones must be promoted from adults, Adults are self explanitory, Rascals are equivalent to teens, and pups are self-explanitory. If you don't want to be promoted to Alpha Male, Beta, or anything, please note it!)
Physical Description: Odd markings are a-okay.(see Lemon) FULL SENTENCES!
Personality: Full sentences! No clichès, like "brave, but soft" or "smart, but mean". Just don't be perfect.
Other: This would include powers, and history. Check out Lemon or Mint's bio for an example.
(NOTES: Brute or She-wolf are acceptable. All things should be where they should be. Powers should be under Other. Gracias!)

LIFE:
Season: Fall
Human Month: October
Weather: Chilly.
Prey: Not much is out but deer, though there are some pretty fat squirrels
Herb garden: Slowly dying
Rivals: None
(this will become more advanced)
HERB CLAN-
HUNTERS-
game:
Young and Old Deer- ok-plentiful
Young and Old Moose-ok
Waterfowl- geese, ducks-plentiful
Game birds- grouse, turkey, pheasant-plentiful
Rabbits-plentiful
LARGE rodents (rat or bigger)-ok
Fish-plentiful
Raccons-ok- NIGHT ONLY

BIOS ARE ON NEXT POST, as they are rather long.
If you wish to write your own bio, write "A" under Other in your form.
If you wish that I take your bio directly from your form, write "B" under Other in your form.
If you wish I paraphrase and write your bio, write "C" under Other in your form.

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Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:58 pm

Nadia looked at Skull. Something about his stance made her take a step towards him. She hesitated on the next realized that he might lash out at her... she couldn't tell if he would or not. Slowly she walked around to his side but somewhat to his face. She was a good distance away that she wouldn't be able to get hit. Silently she whispered to him, "It'll be okay." she didn't let any sign of her talking show.

Brooke watched Skull and she kept tabs on the other wolves still unsure.

Asim didn't move from Mints side. He watched everything silently.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sat Mar 06, 2010 11:24 pm

Skull was surprised by Nadie, one she seemed still to tag along with him and two her words. He growleed deep in his throat. His eyes slid back towrds her his head not moving. H didnt want comfort. he didnt need it and he diliked her givilng it to him. he pressed foward to the edge of camp he had to move end out of here before he could fight, that and get his head on stright.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Mon Mar 08, 2010 12:41 am

Nadia watched him. She growled to herself. Stupid insolent boy! She debated between following or staying.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:00 am

Skull was overwellmed he pushed threw the under bush as he walked furth it grew quite but in his head he heard screams. he herd snarls and he smelled blood. But it wasnt his or ends...

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:01 pm

Punk trotted up next to Nadia, watching Skull. "Some leader." she muttered, watching him closely.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:41 am

Nadia looked at Punk she nodded. "What now..?" she said silently.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Tue Mar 09, 2010 9:29 am

"Well, I don't know." Punk replied, glancing at Nadia before staring back at Skull.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:55 am

Sku pressed on till he reached his makeshift den hidden in the denses part of the forest. He dumped ends body inside the bushes closly impacted hole inweaved with bones and skins and such from previous kills. He padded towrds the streem that trickled only a few yards away from this places and steped into chilling claws letting it wash away his dirt and blood caked fur. Lettting it wash away his thoughts

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:48 am

Punk got up. "Come on, let's get out of here." she said to her, motioning her to follow her back into the woods.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:12 am

Skull laied in the murky waters till his limbs felt num. then his body. And he laied there still. He could feel his heart beat drop as it to was beging to feel the icy clutches of the winter water.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:54 pm

Nadia nodded and went with Punk. "this was a mess." she said quietly.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:38 am

slowly skul became tired as his joints stifined and his body became numb. but he pulled away from the water. He herd a noise i scuttle. he padded towrds it with a slight limp as his joints were stiff. He peered inside his den. Ends body was gone.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Wed Mar 24, 2010 6:56 pm

"It sure was." Punk barked in reply, trotting through the forest further away from the camp.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:45 am

(where is everyone? )= ?? )

Skull growled what now....end was gone, he didnt wan to give away his position anymore then it already was so he didnt call out he sniffed around and found some turned over snow, a mark the woyld be laied by a body being dregged

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Mint lied down suddenly. Before long, she had fallen out of this world. For a while she was on the ground, breathing heavily, thinking too hard and dropping in and out. She wanted to howl, she wanted to stay silent. What had just happened?

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:51 am

(im here, where did everyone else go?)

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:14 am

(idk)
Skll followed a trail the culprate couldnt have gotten far carrying end. end was a huge wolf to drag.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Thu Mar 25, 2010 9:06 am

Asim nuzzled Mint, she looked tired and worn. He felt tired too. Sleep sounded great at the moment.

Nadia followed Punk, "Should we find Skull now?"

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Thu Mar 25, 2010 10:26 am

Punk stopped for a moment. "Probably, who knows what's going on with his head, and I don't think it's a good idea to leave him alone when he's depressed like that."

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:52 am

Skull Saw a big bulky shadow in the distance. This wasnt his day he snapped his mind back into present tense... Right, this is it.... Went on an abush got caught before could attack didnt kill target. So back to being board. End old student bitten by spider wolf. Need to kill spider wolf. AS his teat=cher and only his teacher I brought him back here. Now he has dicided to take a walk, is his pretty dead body. Great, maybe he found a friend.

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Mint whimpered at Asim's touch. A desperate, yet satisfied sound. She was glad he was there, unhappy that she was. Anywhere but there would be fine. She opened her eyes a sat up. She quietly sighed. "Did you grow any calming herbs?" She said this with a tinge of sarcasm, knowing that hardly anything could calm her nerves.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Fri Mar 26, 2010 8:38 am

Punk turned and headed towards Skull's scent, wondering where he was.

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Sat Mar 27, 2010 2:37 am

The shadow was still moving away. Skull crouched closer to the ground as he sithered from one shelter to the next as the blob of darkness moved silenlty and slowly away

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Wed Mar 31, 2010 7:49 am

Asim shook his head, "I figured healing wounds.. not calming nerves." he didn't like seeing her frantic and worn out.

Nadia followed Punk, "Ready for a rabid dog chase?"

Subject: Re: The Outcasts Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:04 am

Punk nodded. "I've been ready." she barked, running after the scent of Skull.