~Unknown Island~The Secret Pack~Part 1: Exposure~ Made by Al

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could they write a pargraph about there charrie??

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Fog padded up the sandy slope that lead out of his den. His light grey fur, matched the mud wall that lined his den. His cerulean eyes scaned teh ocean for any twlogs. None. Fog whent to teh place olny he coudl egt to. The part of a leage that was onto of teh overhang of the Aphla den. there was enough for for 2 wolves. Me and a Aphla she, Fog thought, like always, when he first got to his spot. he could see teh whole camp and island.

Eclipse's gold eyes flashed open. She'd had another dream. Sure, she was glad to have a special gift, well more like gifts, but it could get so annoying and even, at times, scary. She stood and padded out of her den. She sighed and padded over to the fresh-kill pile.

Twilight padded over to his sister. He could tell she'd seen something, as he'd always been the one to know her better then anyone else. His dark blueish black fur shone.

Midnight Sun trotted into the camp, jaws full with the results of her early morning hunt.

Breaking Dawn followed close behind.

Luna padded throuugh the sand at the edge and looking into a tidalpool she saw her cream coat, The color of the sand and a cresent moon on her forehead thats black. She saw her golde eyes that looked like two golden moons.

Beside her stood Mang and Ming . Ming looked into the pool and saw his white pelt and black spots on his ear and tail. He had big brown eyes that had flickers of black in them. Beside him was his sister, Ming. She had a white pelt and black spots on her tail, ears and muzzle. Her eyes were such a light blue they looked white.

Mysty stood beside them with her sister Zapada. Her silver pelt gleaming and her violet eyes sparkling. Zapada saw her snow white pelt and ice blue eyes. She traced the leaf like pattern next to her eyes with her eyes.

Fern walked over to the tidal pool and looked at her reflection. Her pelt was dark grey and her eyes were bright green. She saw the fern pattern that was hidden in her pelt and smiled revealing sharp teeth. She looked to her mother, Mysty and smiled.

"Mama." Spring wailed tired. She slowly crawled over to the pool and gazed at her dark red pelt that shimmered like a river, thus how she got her name. She saw her eyes darken from a bright, lively blue/violet to a dull blue/violet. She saw the indigo swirl around her muzzle.

ORP: Rose, I would like you to edit your paragraph. The majority of it is made of run-on sentences, which you need to spread out.

That's fine mnm

ORP:Its alright!

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Fog watched his pack. sighing and waiting for a new female to come in.

Shadow padded infront of his siblings and elderly parents. His black pelt blended in with the shadows, and the only thing that stood out were his amber eyes that glowed, never dimming, never brightening. His broad shoulders made it easy for him to catch a rabbit. He turned and placed it infront of his mother and father.

Angel smiled weakly at her eldest son. She laid/collapsed on the ground, her snow white fur darkened by the soil. Her black eyes changed to green as she began to nibble at the squirel. Her ribs slightly showed, a sign that she would soon leave to StarPack.

Ocean pressed his dark blue pelt against his mate's comfortingly. His blue eyes were sad and worried. Though he was hungry, he wanted Angel to eat before him. HE wasn't the one who had been captured, and he wasn't the one who was on the verge of death.

Emerald came over to them, carrying River in her mouth. She put down her little sister and sat down next to her brother, her white and green fur standing out next to his. Her bright green eyes watching her mother worriedly.

Roxian watched from the shadows, her black pelt blending in perfectly, but her red paws, ears, tail, and eyes shone brightly. She sat still as if she were a statue, then jumped up. She came back down with a squirel in her jaws. She dropped it infront of her father, then went back to the shadows.

River watched Roxian, her bright blue eyes wide and curious. Her ribs showed through her white and blue pelt, but she was too young to eat solid food. She was the last she of her parents latest litter to survive.

Dusk wobbled over to his sister, hunger weakening him. He collapsed next to her, a small brown lump that was breathing. His brown eyes blended in with his pelt, so it look like he had no eyes. His ribs were sticking out much more than Angel's and River's, and he was the closest the StarPack.

" Camp" Fog said looking down at a valley. It has a small stream running though with what They could see, fish. Good prey.... The aphal den was surred by a rose barrier, with a rock overhand. A Across from the aphla's den was a straching log. It must have fallen down by lightning besid eit was at a angle. Beside the log where to dens. Again one den was surrved by branbles, throns and roses. Nuresy, beside it apprences den.

On the far side of the camp was a small opening. there was a slope, taht led down into a clearning. They could hear the guggling of a second stream, tough teh cave emrtnce den.There that there was small holes, where herbs could go. Meecail wolf. On the other side of the den, was an elders den. It is warm and cozy. Very, oldish. It has a patch of Roses on the side, wher ethe elders could stuck tehre head out and watch the roses. IN the middle of camp was a sandy place, where wolves could sun-them selfs. Beside teh aphla's den was a perfect coner for freash-kill. The prefect size to

Fern walked beside Luna leaving the tidal pool to venture into the woods.

Mysty and Zapada padded infront of them with Spring and Fern in their mouths.

Ming and Mang folowed behind Fern and Luna.