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"He isn't messed up Flowerfur, he's just different." Nutfur said, trying to calm her.

Coalkit didn't respond, he knew all that would come out was a squeak. No one like messed up kits around here, his mother was right. He broke through the wall, like you would never think a small kit would be able to do, and ran off into the woods. (no body follow him, he'll come back)

Nutfur froze, what to do? whats to do?(lol) he asked himself. He ran out. "Pheasantflower!" he called urgently.

I fainted.

(seriously! CMain!get down here or ur GROUNDED!LOL)

(Yeha!)

(LOL)

(yep! CMAIN! GET DOWN HERE NOW! OR UR GROUNDED! ONE......TWO......don't TEST ME CMAIN! NOW!!! OKAY! I"M COUNTING TO THREEEEEEE< ONE< TWO> THHHHHHRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!)(lol)

(What ever! make the kit come home lets say it's been a year!"

(ok)

Coal looked at Stream, and Flounder, and all of his friends, he was grown up now. "You guys, I think it might be time for me to go home. It's been a while, and I've been wanting to go home, to see everyone again." he said, his friends looked at him in awe.
"But, Coal, you said you didn't fit in there." Stream said.
"I know, i know, but, i think, now that i've changed, i might be able to go back. They don't even know i can talk!"
"Coal! Please don't lave!" Lightning begged.
"I have to! Lightning! I'm sorry. But, i need to find my way back now." Coal said, looking up to the stars.
"Then, Coal! We can't see you go!" Flounder cried.
"I have to!"
"Then, I'm comming with you!" Stream said.
"Stream! It was long! Even me as a kit traveling, it was tough."
"You're only a to-be!" Flounder said.
"A grown to-be, I'm the best fighter, i can make my way back."
"Coal, if you're going, I'm comming with you!" Stream said.
He gave up.
"Fine." he finally pushed out.
"We leave tomorroe morning." Coal said finally.

nigh crept into the shadows, and completly dimalished the suns rays of light, and filled it with the song of crickets. As morning crept silenlty over the mountains, somewhere far away, someone received a dream.
"Minnowpaw! Minnowpaw! Arouse!" Came a voice.
"who, who are you?" Minnowpaw asked.
"Pigeonpelt. Your cousin Nutfur would know me, but there is no time. We need you!"
"Need me? Why?" minnowpaw asked.


(time pass, Minnowpaw's sent out to find Stream and Coal, as they travel, and find him, Stream is killed, Coal is devastated, Minnowpaw and Coal find their way home, well, actually, they're reaching the clan right now.)

Coal looked sadly over, this, he remembered was home.
"I could have saved her!" he cried.
"Coal! No, you couldn't have! You tried all you could! She could never have lived the mountains, and the wildcats there!"
"by the way, you'll be Coalpaw now."
Coalpaw didn't say a word, he was still devastated.

(actually, Minnowpaw sadly died to, so its even more hard on him.)

Coal saw his uncle Minnowpaw fall down, the poisen in the berry had taken his life.

"Minnowpaw! Why! You were so close!" Coalpaw cried. But the unmoving firgure didn't answer.

I woke up.

Coalpaw walked sadly on, stumbling his paws in the dirt, there was no chance for survival, dust fulled his eyes and nose, as he coughed, then willing, he dfell to the ground, hopping to die there, just like his friends had, Stream and Minnowpaw. He was starved, tired, and hungry, soon, he would run out of water. He saw a faint tree ahead, vegitation, but he wasn't strong enough to get that far. Him, he, who had been strongest of all the cats, him, who looked the best with his eyes, him, who was fastest in all the tribe, him, who was waiting to die.

I looked around,"NNUUUUTTTTFFFUURRRR!!!!!"she screamed.

Nutfur ran out of the den, to Flowerfur. "What is it?" he asked.
(ig2g soon)

"Our son is out there!"

"Out where? Coalkit?" his eye lids flew up. "I'm on it!" he said, running out.

She nodded.

Nutufr ran out, as far as he could, when he approched desert, but something surged him to go further. When he saw a figure, grey"Coalkit!" he cried. Faint handsome eyes looked up, but the sparkle that had danced in them before, was gone. "Who, who, are you?" came the reply. "Your father!" with that, he helped his son up, and to the forest.

I yawned.

(Hi)

Two figures appeared in the distance of the camp of Wildclan. Wolfpaw ran up to them. "Nutfur! Coalkit-er-paw! Where is Minnowpaw?" she called.
"Minnowpaw, didn't make it." replied a weary Coalpaw.

I fell asleep.

"Coalpaw!"she ran to him,"How dare you ever leave me again!"she snarled,"Go to the nursery right now!"she slapped him with her tail.

He moved back, angrily. "this isn't what i came back for!" he said angrily.
"I'm an apprentice now! I don't go to the nursery!" he said. Nutufr studied his son over, yes, he wasn't a kit, he had been trained well, and he looked almost like a warrior, maybe in a few days......