MistyRain
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Nickname: : Mist, Misty, Misteh-you get the point
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 |  Subject: TONIGHT -- A Poem by Misty  Tue Jul 06, 2010 2:58 pm | |
| WARNING! Dark themes in this poem. Just sayin'. This is all hypothetical, of course. - Spoiler:
If I killed myself tonight,
Would you be the one to hold me tight?
Would you cry into my lifeless chest,
While I was in eternal rest?
Because I know I would for you,
And I selfishly wish you would for me, too.
But, you will never love me,
That much I see.
If I killed myself tonight,
You would not be the one to hold me tight.
Hope you like it. It's raw and pretty unedited, and honestly I think it sucks, but tell me what you think. | |
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MistyRain
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Number of posts : 2882
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| | Subject: Re: TONIGHT -- A Poem by Misty Wed Jul 07, 2010 7:15 am | |
| Oops I put this in the wrong place... Whatevs. | |
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WoLf_MiStReSs
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Number of posts : 14540
Age : 27
Nickname: : MeEr, Mkitty, Wolfie, Moe, Mcat, Missy, Pedro
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| | Subject: Re: TONIGHT -- A Poem by Misty Wed Jul 07, 2010 8:05 am | |
| i like it, it doesnt matter that it has a dark theme, I have to say i liked it | |
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MistyRain
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Nickname: : Mist, Misty, Misteh-you get the point
Registration date : 2008-12-29
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| | Subject: Re: TONIGHT -- A Poem by Misty Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:42 am | |
| Thankies  So glad that you like my poem!!! | |
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WoLf_MiStReSs
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Number of posts : 14540
Age : 27
Nickname: : MeEr, Mkitty, Wolfie, Moe, Mcat, Missy, Pedro
Registration date : 2008-07-04
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| | Subject: Re: TONIGHT -- A Poem by Misty Wed Jul 07, 2010 11:13 am | |
| It wasn't bad at all I liked it | |
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