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PostSubject: .:Behind the Glass:. They say it's different on the other side   .:Behind the Glass:. They say it's different on the other side I_icon_minitimeTue Feb 03, 2009 4:12 am

Life as Melysa knew it was always good. Father had a good job, mother was the picturesque stay-home-baker seen in fantasies. She had a crowd of friends all around her, and most of all, she was at the top of her grade with all A's. But then, high school hits. What will happen to this picture-perfect girl when her friends start drinking, her best friend hooks up with a senior, her father is thinking about dropping his high end job for the meager pay of a teacher, and worst of all, her first B threatens to ruin her life, and not just because it ruins her spotless report card.

Good plot line? Hope so, I am excited! Let me know, and I'll start posting chapters.

Melysa twirled in her back to school outfit. It was horribly hot outside, and going to rise to almost 100 degrees! Her discarded capri and shirt outfit still lay on her chair, waiting to be worn on a cooler day. Instead, Mel sported a flowing hawaii flowered tank and denim skirt, just long enough to be dress code. Smiling at her reflection, she scrunched her hair once, feeling the gel crunch between her fingers. It was time to go.

Sorry I didn't get much done. I have to go do hw, do more later!


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luvvv it!!
Questons!

1:"picturesque" what does that mean?
2: " B " do you mean BF?
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like the perfect example of a mother, cliche. like the mom that stays home making cookies.
and B, as in her first B in a class at school.
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It's great!

PERfect summary for a book! =///_~=
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thanks guys ! i'll post soon
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I love it! hurry up and post it!
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