Addy i changed a couple things about you but thats cuz mah teacher made me but...here it is! :
Seventeen year old Addy Miller sat on the roof which was right outside her window. Her brown eyes were fixed on the
forest. Her long, thin legs shook in the cold. The wind blew her thick, curly, brown hair. Her pale skin shone in the
morning sun. She was still cold in her jeans and t-shirt, even though she had a denim jacket on. She wrapped her
thin arms around herself to try to keep warm.