Sunclan! The clan of trust, loyaly, and thoughest

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You walk tough the undergroth in some un nkow forst. Or thats what you think... You can fell 5 paris of eyes bruning though you, but you think you are just imarling it. Then sucddlying and small but frice she cat jumped on you an piines you down. the four otehrs gatehr around. " Get off Yellowfang." one, a tom says. " Make me," the she cat, Yellowfang who is on you snappes. " Fine," the tom growls and pulles her off. " Get up!" a big she cat says walking you. You can tell indely that she is teh leader beause of her seant. You do what she odears. She glavers into your eyes. Her pale icy blue eyes are clod. " whoa re you and what are you doing on Sunclan terrior?" she demands. What do you say... The choise is yours...

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Pups:
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Members:

Leader:
Riverstar~ she cat~ me~

Deputy:
Lightningstripe ~ tom~ kaikai

Med. Cat:
Yellowfang ~ she cat~me

Med cat appreince:
?

Warriors:
Stonefur~tom~me
Feathertail~she cat~ me
Vinemist~ tom ~me

Apperinces:
??

Queens:
??

Kits:
??

Elders:
??

Rules:
No chat speak.

Pleas emake it more than one line!
Bad ex: i walked though the forst. To plain!
Good ex: I walked though the ever so green forst. Some of the moss around teh trss slicked up it like a snake. I stared into the valley below, pale blue eyes shinny.

Speak in third person, its eaiser for people to know who you are talking to
Bad Ex:
I talked to her
Good Ex:
Sun watched and talked to River

I will give you 5 chases for the rules, if you get to 5, i may ask you to leave

type Sun Dancer if you read the rules

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Lightningstripe sat down. He was bored. He took a patrol out and took two warriors out.

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" yea,l lets go start training," Feathertail and walked to the enternce. Fetaherfail fickered her tail to singal for Hollypaw to follow.

(hey who can rianpaw mentore be?)
Lionheart ywned.

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( umm.. Riverstar?)

YOU SURE!

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( yep)

Awsome Rainpaw and lionheart... can you add them to the list)

(Cherrypaw needs a mentor)
"Now we'll try some basic ones. First jump on me." said Greenfur and Moonpaw jumped but Green fur rolled to the side. "Think you can do that." She asked Moonpaw as he stood back up.
"sure" he said and pre pared to doge to the side.

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(vinemist ?)

Greenfur jumped and Moonpaw dived to the side. But to Moonpaw's surprise she landed facing him.
"You turned your paws to the side you were dodging. Try to keep them still. In a battle I would have aimed to the side." She told her starteled apprentice. "Let's try it again." Greenfur readied her self to do it again.

Rainpaw seatled down in front of the apprentice den.

"Okay Feathertail!" Hollypaw answered cheerfully folling her out into the forest

(hello?0

Moonpaw tried again. His mentor lept and he dodged. She landed in the dust. Quickly Moonpaw turned and lapt on Greenfur's back.
Greenfur flipped over and rolled around untill Moonpaw let go. "Good job!" Greenfur complemented her apprentice. "Now let's get back to camp. You have some moss to clean out."
"Awwwwwwwww!" moaned Moonpaw. He followed his mentor out of the hollow , and they headed back to camp.

(anyone here anyone rp here anymore?)

(I do , but your never on when I am)

( I wounder why scratch

)

(Opposite schedules?)

:roll:

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