Idea needs critique-ing!

Guest

hai guiz

So, I had an idea. I thought I could write a full blown novel about two kids who have these old antique mirrors in their attics. The two kids are like, childhood friends(cliche, i know). So, then they start seeing ghosties in the mirror. And the girl has a benevolent ghosty and the boy has a meanie ghosty. The boy's mirror breaks, and the evil ghosty gets out!!! DUN DUN DUN So the girl and the nice ghosty have to help the boy ~~kill~~ destroy the meanie ghost.... Idea needs critique-ing! Icon_biggrin

Subject: Re: Idea needs critique-ing! Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:10 am

Umm... nice wording... lol Good idea! Maybe the guys mom could be a kind of psycic, or medium or something lol.

and the house was the grounds for ritual burials... and it's in louisana... and voodooist are there!

yeah. i know. lol

Guest

No, I totally get it! Idea needs critique-ing! Icon_smile

I love your idea.

and yes, I was a little hyper while I typed that. =/

Subject: Re: Idea needs critique-ing! Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:51 am

it sounds cool, and maybe you could e-mail it to me or something, and I can give it to my friend and she can give it to her cousin! (he's an author)

Guest

sorry rayne, but why on earth would sunny do that? its her story, and she doesn't really want anyone else to use it, especially someone who has access to a publishing center.

and sunny, great idea !
one thing. you can't kill a ghostie. its already dead. durr =P (:

Subject: Re: Idea needs critique-ing! Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:37 am

he'd just help get it published, if she wanted, is all I'm saying, he wouldn't be stealing her story or anything.

Guest

He might get it published, or he might rip it off and scam me. That's the problem with the 'net.

Lily, oh, right... Well, I know! They try and get the ghostie back in the underworld or something. But you get the point. ;)

Subject: Re: Idea needs critique-ing! Thu Oct 15, 2009 7:17 am

YouBelongToMe<3 wrote:: Umm... nice wording... lol Good idea! Maybe the guys mom could be a kind of psycic, or medium or something lol.

and the house was the grounds for ritual burials... and it's in louisana... and voodooist are there!

yeah. i know. lol

ooh, ooh, ooh!
how about the guy's mom could be a psychic and the girl's mom "plays" with the Ouija board. [she could hold meetings with others who believe in the spirited?]

Guest

Silly Yellie. Don't call out. Raise your hand next time. :P

Or how about the guy plays with the ouija board?

ooooo I just had an idea! The story switches time periods between the ghosts and the kids. Idea needs critique-ing! Icon_biggrin

So, Ch. 1:

Girl and Guy are explained, mirrors introduced.

Ch. 2:

Nice ghost speaks of her past

Ch. 3:

Modern people do stuff

Ch 4:

something about the evil ghost...

You get the point.

Subject: Re: Idea needs critique-ing! Thu Oct 15, 2009 8:58 am

i is sorry.

yes! and he talks with the ghosts in the mirror!

Guest

All right, Miss Yellie, excused this time.

YES!
...

Now I actually have to write.
*sigh*

I'll post when I actually do write.

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