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~Meg~ Geek
Number of posts : 184 Age : 27 Nickname: : Meg DragonEggs :
Registration date : 2008-12-13
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: Icicle Creek:Nala Female Brave,Liberty Female shy but playful, Sharp tooth Runt male sneaky.Crakle Rock:Nala Brave Female,Liberty Female shy but playful,Trusty Male brave (Nala's and libertys dad),Sharp Tooth male Runt sneaky.Welcome to the North Pole:Meg Female 16 kid,Kim Female 18 Kid,Ashley Female 19 (megs friend), Prancer reindeer male 5 (megs pet),Spot male reindeer 14 (kims pet),Brownie 12 female horse (kims horse),Skamps 4 male dog (kims dog),Mittens 2 female kitten(kims cat). Sun Set Adcademy:Emma female,Breena female, Ally female, Kimmy female, Ashley female. Horse RP:Brownie female, Midnight Male.Florida University:Carly Hamlon female 15, Kim Hamlon female 16, Ashley Packer 15, Rob Hankey male 17,Drake Hathaway male 16.
| Subject: Do you think i should continue this Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:16 am | |
| Meg a bright young girl jumped out of the truck. "Dad are you sure this school is gonna be ok?" Meg said in a wobbly voice."Meg your 13 years old now I think you are old enough to know that"Megs dad said looking down at meg."But dad i haven't moved since I was one and when i was one i wanted to move but now i am not sure"Meg replied."come on meg Your almost an adult and i am sure you will met some petty nice new friends here they can maybe even replace your old friends"Megs dad said while grabing a few bags from the back of the truck."Dad I can't replace my old friends.Just because You haven't seen me in five years dosen't mean you can still treat me like trash"Meg giggled and grab to bags and brought them inside."Meg i have to show you something"Megs dad started to walk inside the house with meg following behide."Dad just tell me already"Meg said in a very clam excited voice."This"Megs dad pointed to a mountain in a far distance where the sun was setting."Dad its just a mountain whats the big deal. wait... are trying to tell me to get all my stuff inside before the sun sets"Meg said starting to dash outside the house."NO... Meg get back here"Megs dad shouting while running outside to find meg."Don't worry i got it all"Meg Struggled to talk while holding two bags in both hands One bag starped around each shoulder and one just resting on her back."Meg I pointed at the mountains because the sun is setting but i was trying to tell you yesterday was the past you have to let it go you can't go back in time"Megs dad said."so your saying...?"asked meg."well i am trying to say yesterday was the past you can't get it back so everything that happen yesterday you have to forget including friends"Megs dad tried to say it simply."Whatever dad I knew i never should of moved down here"Meg droped everything she was holding and dashed in her room.Meg stuffed her head in a pillow and started to cry."Meg..."Megs dad got cut off by meg."HUSH UP and go away if i am not here tomorrow its because i found a new place to be"meg shouted.her dad just walked away like nothing had happen.
tell me if you like it so far if you do i will continue it!
Last edited by ~Meg~ on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:58 am; edited 1 time in total | |
| | | holagurl175 Moderator
Number of posts : 16089 Age : 28 Nickname: : Natalie(Nat)
Princess<3 Registration date : 2008-10-14
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: Moon HighSchool- Lorrraine
| Subject: Re: Do you think i should continue this Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:33 am | |
| I think u shoud, but i can barely read it cause it's all crammed together and ur misspelling stuff and bad grammar. Do some adjustments. | |
| | | ~Meg~ Geek
Number of posts : 184 Age : 27 Nickname: : Meg DragonEggs :
Registration date : 2008-12-13
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: Icicle Creek:Nala Female Brave,Liberty Female shy but playful, Sharp tooth Runt male sneaky.Crakle Rock:Nala Brave Female,Liberty Female shy but playful,Trusty Male brave (Nala's and libertys dad),Sharp Tooth male Runt sneaky.Welcome to the North Pole:Meg Female 16 kid,Kim Female 18 Kid,Ashley Female 19 (megs friend), Prancer reindeer male 5 (megs pet),Spot male reindeer 14 (kims pet),Brownie 12 female horse (kims horse),Skamps 4 male dog (kims dog),Mittens 2 female kitten(kims cat). Sun Set Adcademy:Emma female,Breena female, Ally female, Kimmy female, Ashley female. Horse RP:Brownie female, Midnight Male.Florida University:Carly Hamlon female 15, Kim Hamlon female 16, Ashley Packer 15, Rob Hankey male 17,Drake Hathaway male 16.
| Subject: Re: Do you think i should continue this Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:57 am | |
| ok i will fix that its not bad grammer just pointing that out its the way they talk | |
| | | _furryfurby Administrator
Number of posts : 11479 Registration date : 2008-03-19
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: https://webkinzbeach.forumotion.net/furry-s-rp-characters-h6.htm
| Subject: Re: Do you think i should continue this Fri Dec 19, 2008 11:13 am | |
| yes, continue. it has a good plot; spice it up! i agree with hola, please separate your writing and edit it.
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| | | ~Meg~ Geek
Number of posts : 184 Age : 27 Nickname: : Meg DragonEggs :
Registration date : 2008-12-13
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: Icicle Creek:Nala Female Brave,Liberty Female shy but playful, Sharp tooth Runt male sneaky.Crakle Rock:Nala Brave Female,Liberty Female shy but playful,Trusty Male brave (Nala's and libertys dad),Sharp Tooth male Runt sneaky.Welcome to the North Pole:Meg Female 16 kid,Kim Female 18 Kid,Ashley Female 19 (megs friend), Prancer reindeer male 5 (megs pet),Spot male reindeer 14 (kims pet),Brownie 12 female horse (kims horse),Skamps 4 male dog (kims dog),Mittens 2 female kitten(kims cat). Sun Set Adcademy:Emma female,Breena female, Ally female, Kimmy female, Ashley female. Horse RP:Brownie female, Midnight Male.Florida University:Carly Hamlon female 15, Kim Hamlon female 16, Ashley Packer 15, Rob Hankey male 17,Drake Hathaway male 16.
| Subject: Re: Do you think i should continue this Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:26 am | |
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Number of posts : 11479 Registration date : 2008-03-19
Character sheet Role-Playing Game Field: https://webkinzbeach.forumotion.net/furry-s-rp-characters-h6.htm
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